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The way you color coat the whole comic is just clean and simple. It just adds to the atmosphere.
Also wondering how Cigul is going to fix his scarf and not to mention Soar's hat, Moonbeam...it was just completely demolished by the looks in the last scene.
Anyway good luck in Round 4!
So this first part is really great with the guy from Mayvor's introduction hahaha. Poor Wally and 807... ALSO THESE BOTS. I FEEL LIKE YOU HAD A LOT OF FUN WITH THE BOTS THIS ROUND! I don't blame ya the little guys are amazing ahaha. Magical critters of small stature? :0 Hm, never thought about that, but it makes sense in a place like The City. And then, I always love the Scribbletalk parts. They've always got interesting things to say and it all just makes so much sense! And then Theo just...casually bursts through the ground! Hey man what are you doing there, oh, destroying private property ok. AND THEN THERE WAS A YOU...IN JAIL! Also Rifter. I actually had to go back and see if he was in the cell next to Cigul. Sneaky little...teleporter...why are you in there, Rif. I_I
Every line with the Drones is pretty much gold. Also that bird looks downright terrifying with that small blade hmm. Hahaha, "We're safe..." then the opened safe just really gets me. xD It's play on words...BUT WITH SCRIBBLETALK! :0 Then there's this interaction between Theo and Cigul which I just adore. You really caught his personality, and poor Cigul can't even communicate with the guy. They be powerful, Theo! Then you used the surrounding boilers in your fight. SO CLEVER, I was just like...I dunno how to ground them. 1nky you so smart.
Bahahahaha, Miral called Theo a chicken, I just think that's fantastic.
They too fast for you Theo. Just stop tryin'! Also, right around here I just noticed Cigul's ripped arm keeps changing...I think. o_o Maybe something to look out for next round! Unless he gets it fixed. Now I see what you mean by the pillar of rock thing haha, yeah that's reasonable. xD THEN OH NO SLOTH AHHHH NOOOOO BABBU! D: AND THE MYSTERIOUS STRANGER WAS SOAR. His poor hat's tremblin. D: Oh man, Cigul blasted the Cracks! :0 Gogogo! Poor guy's scared as all get out. Q_Q TAKE THE WINSEARS POWER AHHH OH NOOOOOO! Ah boy...where are they falling to now? 1NKY. 1NKY HURRY AND BE IN ROUND 4 SO WE CAN SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT AHHHH! QAQ akldsfhkljf So much things!
What I really love about your entry is it combined the plot, character interaction, and fight into one big scene. It flowed extremely well and your pacing was nothing short of magnificent. >w< Not to mention, IT'S BEAUTIFUL ALKHGLKSJDAFKLS. I know you didn't get to finish and you're not completely satisfied, but you have clean, soft lineart which can stand on it's own, but you accent it with great colours. They're kinda surreal too, rather than flat colours. I JUST LOVE YOUR ROUND OKAY akljsdflkhgalksjfklhoiwmvlas ♥ Good luck at the judge's table! I'm sure they'll pick correctly if they know what's good for 'em! (9omo)9
I was wondering why Soar was in the previous set wit the proposition... just where are these tendril things coming from? And from who (if there even is a who that is)? So many questions!
This was a great round 1nky! So many delicious things... I just can't get enough!
Those tree things. >:U They are behind all this madness, Mother Nature has done it again!
Anywhoot, I remember some of this from the stream, and on a whole this was quite the interesting read.
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