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I'm not happy with anything above Theodore's "Haha."

Still, hopefully this was an interesting read. I think this part works better without colour, actually.

There was originally going to be more to this, but it looks like it'll have to be in Spectator Entry form.

EDIT: Just clarifying - Soar isn't the villain, here.

Theodore © :iconpandachu:
Sloth © :icon73oss:
Soar © :iconpridealchemist7:
Cigul and Miral © myself.
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Soar! Cyc must be so worried about his friend...but wow nice twist having Soar in there like that.
The way you color coat the whole comic is just clean and simple. It just adds to the atmosphere.
Also wondering how Cigul is going to fix his scarf and not to mention Soar's hat, Moonbeam...it was just completely demolished by the looks in the last scene.

Anyway good luck in Round 4!
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~Pandachu Jul 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Aaaaah I just can't get enough of this round. xD (Well, the same with your other rounds, I tend to go back and read them over an' over ahaha). 1nky you've got such awesome storytelling, very entertaining and captivating. You're also a beast with body language. Especially with characters like the Flecks, their emotions really come across just in the way they act and react. Anyway, onto these parts!

So this first part is really great with the guy from Mayvor's introduction hahaha. Poor Wally and 807... ALSO THESE BOTS. I FEEL LIKE YOU HAD A LOT OF FUN WITH THE BOTS THIS ROUND! I don't blame ya the little guys are amazing ahaha. Magical critters of small stature? :0 Hm, never thought about that, but it makes sense in a place like The City. And then, I always love the Scribbletalk parts. They've always got interesting things to say and it all just makes so much sense! And then Theo just...casually bursts through the ground! Hey man what are you doing there, oh, destroying private property ok. AND THEN THERE WAS A YOU...IN JAIL! Also Rifter. I actually had to go back and see if he was in the cell next to Cigul. Sneaky little...teleporter...why are you in there, Rif. I_I

Every line with the Drones is pretty much gold. Also that bird looks downright terrifying with that small blade hmm. Hahaha, "We're safe..." then the opened safe just really gets me. xD It's play on words...BUT WITH SCRIBBLETALK! :0 Then there's this interaction between Theo and Cigul which I just adore. You really caught his personality, and poor Cigul can't even communicate with the guy. They be powerful, Theo! Then you used the surrounding boilers in your fight. SO CLEVER, I was just like...I dunno how to ground them. 1nky you so smart.

Bahahahaha, Miral called Theo a chicken, I just think that's fantastic. :lmao: AND THEN THEO RIPPED CIGUL'S FABULOUS SCARF! OAO Theo why you no like fashion. u^u Ah, then this turnaround of Cigul, I really have to say is amazing. The urgency and concentration in his expression is really powerful, I think. c: Then there's that sequence where Theo falls into the ground, which I think has to be my favorite. The way you accented it with colour is just...wow 1nky teach me how to art like goddamn. ♥ Miral always cracks me up. She's so spunky and protective haha. "Are you hurt?" "No..." Cigul you are so angsty she is just trying to help you. AND--AND THEN YOU BROUGHT BACK THAT DUMB ENDING I HAD FOR ROUND 2 AHAHAHA! THIS IS WONDERFUL 1NKY I LOVE YOU MAN. You used it so much better than me I can't even comprehend how cool you are. That silhouette shot of Theo under the Flecks too man. Sloth's memories? How you gonna do that Soar? Oh well, doesn't matter if you could. AND THEN MIRAL SCREAMS. YOU JUST HAVE EVERYTHING AHHHH! ...then the eyes...hehehehehe... :iconheplz: That last panel, though, I just love how over-reactive Miral is.

They too fast for you Theo. Just stop tryin'! Also, right around here I just noticed Cigul's ripped arm keeps changing...I think. o_o Maybe something to look out for next round! Unless he gets it fixed. Now I see what you mean by the pillar of rock thing haha, yeah that's reasonable. xD THEN OH NO SLOTH AHHHH NOOOOO BABBU! D: AND THE MYSTERIOUS STRANGER WAS SOAR. His poor hat's tremblin. D: Oh man, Cigul blasted the Cracks! :0 Gogogo! Poor guy's scared as all get out. Q_Q TAKE THE WINSEARS POWER AHHH OH NOOOOOO! Ah boy...where are they falling to now? 1NKY. 1NKY HURRY AND BE IN ROUND 4 SO WE CAN SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT AHHHH! QAQ akldsfhkljf So much things!

What I really love about your entry is it combined the plot, character interaction, and fight into one big scene. It flowed extremely well and your pacing was nothing short of magnificent. >w< Not to mention, IT'S BEAUTIFUL ALKHGLKSJDAFKLS. I know you didn't get to finish and you're not completely satisfied, but you have clean, soft lineart which can stand on it's own, but you accent it with great colours. They're kinda surreal too, rather than flat colours. I JUST LOVE YOUR ROUND OKAY akljsdflkhgalksjfklhoiwmvlas ♥ Good luck at the judge's table! I'm sure they'll pick correctly if they know what's good for 'em! (9omo)9
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:iconcryforeverplz: oh my goodness this was a good read, NOOOOO CIGUL!!SOAR!!!
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=perplexingPariah Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my gosh I am shivering in anticipation.
I was wondering why Soar was in the previous set wit the proposition... just where are these tendril things coming from? And from who (if there even is a who that is)? So many questions!
This was a great round 1nky! So many delicious things... I just can't get enough!
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*0tacoon Jun 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
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Those tree things. >:U They are behind all this madness, Mother Nature has done it again!

Anywhoot, I remember some of this from the stream, and on a whole this was quite the interesting read. :D It looks awesome and I wish you the best of luck, 1nky! :thumbsup:
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~rexultimatewarrior Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's always the quiet ones.
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~Stingdragon Jun 26, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Whhaaatt?! Soar? What? I don't even! WHAT?!
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~Falceto-Rekuri Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG. That was...that was intense! 8UUUU Ah gosh, you end the page with a cliffhanger. aklsndklanklasndand IASNDKAJNSDKASDSAND THIS IS GOING TO BE A VERY HARD MATCH TO CHOOSE. ;A; AAAAAAHHHHH. Anyway, awesome entry that made me laugh and then you just gotta cling onto your seat on this last page! D:
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